Giúp e vs ạ , e chx hiểu lắm .

Mn xem giúp e là đã đúng grammar hay vocabulary chx ạ? Nếu sai thì sửa lại giúp e vs:((

Now, we are studying online,and this is my chance to make time for my favorite hobby - watching horror movies. It has been my hobby since I was little, but lately I rarely have a little free time to watch movies because I have a lot of important exams. I usually spend time before going to bed to watch a movie scenes, but it leaves a very uncomfortable feeling because I have to stop watching as soon as I fall asleep. Now that I have passed all the tests, I can lie in bed and watch my favorite movie for hours. I have an account on Nexfilix to watch my favorite movies and I am very interested in that too. My favorite movie is La Larona, it's about an unfortunate woman whose husband's betrayal leads to her having a nervous breakdown and then she drowns her children and then there are many stories about her. Each movie gives me completely different feelings and thoughts, so watching horror movies for me is an extremely interesting thing. I've watched almost all of the most popular movies on the Internet, but I only watch the movies over and over again that I really love. Some movies that are regularly reviewed are The Nun, The Conjuring, IT, Annabelle come home, etc. Now every month my parents have to pay more than 5 millions to Nefilix for the whole family to see the movie and I am the one who watches the most movies. My mother used to say that one day I would become a horror film director. Watching movies is an activity for entertainment but not so that you will have to forget everything around. I'm very fortunate that I fully support not being that person; so in the future I will not stop pursuing my passion for watching horror movies. But there is a big drawback when I watch this type of movie is that most of the movies have regulations banning children under 16 years old, so I rarely watch horror movies in cinemas.