"Write your story in 80-100 story" 

Are you sure about that

I don think this is right

bạn đã được 4.0 IELT chx mak đòi chấm bài 

:) 4.0 ms là trình độ thấp nhất trong các bậc

mik nghĩ bạn nên khiêm tốn chút =))

Xin lỗi ý tôi ko phải khoe khoang trình đọ IELT.  Vì tôi có thầy nhá ok 

street,buildings,mountains,sea close together????

What an amazing fantasy story, unrealis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Weldone!!!!!!!!

   I was walking alone near the beach when I suddenly heard somebody screaming from the pine bushes. At first I was very startled at how to react to the screaming that i was hearing, my every nerve was alert. I started walking toward the pine bushes and their I saw a young girl of 13 years old having black hair and dark brown eyes, dressed in formal shirt and jeans. She was looking at something down her feet and was screaming violently. I wasn't quite sure what it was. though i tried my best to give it a close look to figure out what it was but i wasn't able to see it quite well. 
   All the people started to gather near her as I drew nearer I realized it was a snake. Dark brown and black in color. The child's face was pale, all the blood had drained from it at the sight of that treacherous snake. I was also frightened for the little girl. In and the mean while, a man came pulled the snake and threw it towards the water. The snake's skin as touched the water it went deep into the water and the mother of the child hugged her and cuddled her. She thanked the man for saving her daughters life.

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Mình viết được vài chữ thui nhé!

1) Finally, i did it. I were very happy. The exam was so hard. There were so much things to past the exam. But I win it. Yeah!

2) Finally, I did it. I am the winners that copetition, which make me so nervous. But now I am so happy, you know.

Mình gợi ý cho bạn một vài trường vậy nhé! Bạn cứ viết tiếp theo ý mình

MÌnh có lòng tốt giới thiệu cho bạn nè! Nếu bạn muốn kiểm tra ngữ pháp thì vô Google tải Gramarly. Đăng ký và bạn có thể sử dụng mọi lúc mọi nơi.

That was the happiest  day of my life. It was Monday morning. I was at my home, having a morning tea. I was much tensed that morning; it was the day of my final BDS result. As the results of all other three classes have been arrived. So, I was eagerly waiting for my results. At last, the day of my results arrived. As all my exams had gone pretty well, I have also scored good marks in case studies. However, I was still nervous regarding my results. As I was dreaming about my results while taking a sip of tea; suddenly the phone rang and I was so excited as my mom told me it was my friends phone.

Every one of us, when we grow up, leaves behind us a childhood of many confusing memories. I still remember the giddy times I forgot about the whole hour, or the time when I went to play and lost the keys to the house. But the memory of my cousin reminds me of an unforgettable memory.

During summer holidays, I often go home to my parents. I love going home because I have a cousin there. He is a year older than me and very dear to me. Every time I go back to my hometown, I often take me out to play around. He walked ahead, I was running behind. When I was tired, he often carried me on my back and ran. Sitting on my brother's back, I d to laugh and laugh. My hometown has a white wipe. When I was playing chase, I could not see him, I cried out loudly, he came running from where I was, sprinkling my petals on my head, making me widen my eyes in surprise. In parular, I every time you and your friends take kite flying, watching kites fly to the sky high, I never get bored. He turned me around but my whinyness caused an accident. That day, he took me to a friend's house. On the way, I saw a whip that was infinitely wrong.

The ripe ripe fruits look eyes. I stopped and pointed at the bunches of fruit that were floating in the foliage. I want to eat whip. He intended to climb up for me. He stood up and shook his head: "The tree is so tall, I can't climb. Well, come with me to the market, I'll buy for you." I said, "No, I to eat the whole bunch! There is no whip this in the market." No matter how convincing you are, I won't. The more he coaxed, the more stubborn I was, and I sat down on the ground, tears started to flow, my hands and feet kicked off. I know, he will definitely pick it for me when he sees me crying. And indeed, I won. He pulled me up, wiped his tears and said, "Stop it, I'll pick it for you." He took me to the gate of his house where he had a whip, called the door and I saw a doctor running out, he asked him to let him get a whip. He agreed but told my brother to be careful because the whip branch was very brittle. He climbed up, climbed very high to pick up the whip I d. But when he was picking, he slipped, falling from the tree. I saw him fall and ran to ask, "Are you in pain?" he forced a smile, saying: "I'm fine. I can rest assured". But that's not it, he broke his leg ...

Dad came home, knew he broke his leg for me. His father scolded me but he told his father: "It's all at you, don't you scold me, don't be afraid". No matter what I did, he always protected me. You are my great brother. When I think about it, I feel spicy in my nose. " That was the happiest / saddiest day of my life" 

I met my best friend when I was small, about 5 years old. It was the first day I went to the kindergarten. I didn't know anyone, I found everything strange and I felt nervous. I went to my class and sat on a desk quietly. A lovely girl came by my side and greeted me. She introduced herself and shook my hands. I found her very sociable and friendly. Since then, we have played, chatted, studied... together. Now, we have been friends for nearly 10 years. We always share every thing together.

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Cảm ơn bạn ^^.

1. He wanted to know whether I understood what she meant.

He said: “Do you understand what she means……………………………………………………………….?

2. Please don’t touch the things on display.

Would you mind not touching the things on display……………………………………………………………?

3. You can’t smoke anywhere in the hospital.

Smoking is not allowed anywwhere in the hospital…………………………………………………………………...

4. Taking notes in shorthand during lectures can help you keep up your shorthand ability.

You can taking notes in shorthand during lectures to keep up your shorthand ability……………………………………………………………………….

5. “Won't you forget to feed the goldfish?” said Mary.

Mary reminded me of feeding the goldfish……………………………………………………

1) He said: "Do you understand what she means? "

2) Would you mind not touching the things on display?

3) Smoking is not allowed in this hospital.

4) You can keep up your shorthand ability by taking notes in shorthand during lectures.

5) Mary reminded me not to forget to feed the goldfish.

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She was walking on the road when suddenly all the buildings and mountains collapsed into the sea. She ran fast and called for help to the people around. But sadly everyone died. .. She had to run away with the hope of surviving and luckily, there was a boat running nearby, then they saw her and came quickly to save her.And finally she Return to shore on another island and live a happy life.

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