- Doing exercise improves muscle strength => It is very good for your muscles and bones

- It increases your energy levels

- It can help you to maintain a healthy weight. The more you exercise, the more calories you burn

- It strengthens your heart muscle

- Exercise can help prevent and treat mental illnesses like depression

- Exercise may reduce the risk of certain cancers

- Moreover, it improves brain function. Exercise increases blood flow and oxygen levels in the brain. It also encourages the release of the brain chemicals

- Active people tend to sleep better

- Keeping fit can reduce some of the effects of aging

In conclusion, doing exercise enables people to have good body-buildings, keep fit and brings many benefits to have a longer, healthier and happier life.

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Exercise is defined as any movement that makes your muscles work and requires your body to burn calories

- Doing exercise improves muscle strength

=> It is very good for your muscles and bones

- It increases your energy levels

- It can help you to maintain a healthy weight. The more you exercise, the more calories you burn

- It strengthens your heart muscle

- Exercise can help prevent and treat mental illnesses like depression

- Exercise may reduce the risk of certain cancers

- Moreover, it improves brain function. Exercise increases blood flow and oxygen levels in the brain. It also encourages the release of the brain chemicals

- Active people tend to sleep better

 - Keeping fit can reduce some of the effects of aging

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In conclusion, doing exercise enables people to have good body-buildings, keep fit and brings many benefits to have a longer, healthier and happier life.

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As you know, community activities are convenient activities that help people develop better and become more mature, and that's why last year I participated in some community activities. Firstly, I went to the orphanage to help children without families, I cooked charity meals for the children, which showed my love for the children and the children were so happy when they had the meals I cooked. Then, I also taught them some lessons in math and English to help them gain better knowledge. Moreover, I also went to nursing homes, played, and talked with the elderly to help them be happier and less lonely. Volunteering helps me better, develop myself, know more about what is volunteering, and helps the community become united. This year, I think I will join some clean-up activities to do some activities such as: picking up litter in the streets and planting trees.
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In Vietnam, almost everyone, has been a volunteer work and I have too. At my age, I have not been donate blood so I often donate books, toys and clothes for street children and homeless people. I often do this work with my mother. Latest here on Sunday, I with my mother was used to donate books and clothes for a charity organization. In here, I met the orphans children. I played with them. Then I gave candies to them. They were all very happy.Some people think doing volunteer work is waste of time but in my opinion, doing volunteer work help me relax after school and it help me healthy. When I doing this work, I feel very happy to bring happiness to them.

- giới thiệu qua về việc phát triển của smartphones và dẫn dắt việc học sinh ngày nay thường sử dụng smartphones.

- Nhấn mạnh rằng mặc cho việc sử dụng smartphones thường xuyên có một vài ản hưởng ko tốt tới học sinh, nhìn chung, smartphones đem lại rất nhiều benefits to schools students

- Idea 1: Smartphones help students to access to the Internet - one of the most useful sources of information

< VD: học online, tìm kiếm thông tin, bài giảng qua mạng,... >

-> HS học tốt hơn. Vs smartphones trong tay HS có thể học mọi lúc mọi nơi

-> Thành tích học tập nhờ vậy mà đc năng cao

- Idea 2 : Smartphones is a sources of entertainment. Using smartphones to relax by listening to music, playing games , chatting with friends through social networking sites such as Fb....

- Kết đoạn nhấn mạnh rằng smartphones đóng một vai trò quan trọng trong đời sống con người, đặc biệt là HS. Chỉ cần họ bt sử dụng smartphones một cách hợp lí thì smartphones ngày càng hữu dụng hơn nữa

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When people's standard of living increase,they often think about improving their knowledge for a better life.To do that,they choose to study in developed contries where they can get progressive education.However,everything has its advantages and disadvantages,so studying abroad is not an exeptation.

In my opinion, I think studying abroad is the beat way to improve ourselve.As you know, there are obvious advantages to study abroad.

Fristly, We have chance to improve our language. I think nothing is better than to learn language with the native speakers.Because we can practise with the local people what we study at school, so it is very useful to improve our listening and speaking skills.It also offer chances to discover the new cultures,way of thinking,history,customs and lifestyles.

Futhermore, we have opportunities to study the new technologies and most recent science achivements.In addition, we are equipped with the valuaable and updated knowledge which may help us find jobs easily after graduating.

However, studying abroad is often expensive.We have to pay not only for our school fees but also for our living cost.Therefore, finance may become the biggest problem. Consequently, it distracts our mind from studying to earning money.

Last but not least,adapting to a new environment is e real challenge for every foreign student.While changing the weather can affect our health,different cultures and customs may influence our mind and make us become less confident or even a victim of discrimination.Everyday may turn into a struggle for survival in a strange coutry.If we dont have enough physical and mental strength,we will fail to adjust ourselve in the new environment.As a result, we could neither study or gain beautiful experiences as we have expected.

In conclustion, while studying abraod offers great opportunities for a better future,it also has challenges that we must try our best to overcome what happened to make our dream come true.Therefore,If you have a chance i think you should take that chance to study abroad.

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It is undeniable that studying abroad provides us with a wide range of benefits. Firstly, studying in a different country helps you to become more independent. It is because you live far from home and have to take responsibility for your cooking, cleaning and paying bills. Moreover, overseas students are exposed to different cultures and customs. When you have a chance of learning in a foreign institution, you will meet people from all over the world who could help you enhance your knowledge about other countries and their residents. Additionally, universities in developing countries may offer better education environment. It is obvious that these colleges are well equipped with a variety of modern facilities that make your study much easier and more effective. In conclusion, personal independence, experiencing a new culture and receiving great education are three main advantages that students can get from studying in foreign countries