Hello everybody!
This is a topic in my IELTS class: Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.

And I have 2 styles of the body for this topic. I dont know what is better choice? Please give me your advice and correct my errors

Thank for helping me

The first one

In order to minimize the state of traffic congestion occurring throughout inner cities, one of the solutions is to adjust the transportation system. In fact, if the streets are wide and here's no road barriers on constructions staying as obstacles on streets, vehicle flows will be much factor and citizens will feel more comfortable. Furthermore, once public transport system in done logically conveniently and used effectively for inhabitant's demand of travelling, people will definitely choose public transports in stead of their own ones. By that way, the amount of vehicle on streets will reduce significantly.

Another resolution that is worth mentioning is to improve citizens' way of thinking and travelling. For instance, when the number of people understand and accept taking public transport as their main means of transport, traffic jam will not happen constantly on the roads. Nevertheless, the local authorities also need to take action to reduce the amount of transport products imported into the cities by imposing high taxes for each means of transport. Therefore, with high prices of vehicle, inhabitants might not been travelling by their own cars or motorcycles.

The second

There are a number of steps need to be taken to solve this problem. First of all, the governments should improve the quality of public transport system, which lessen impact on crowded street in rush hour by decreasing private vehicles. If people feel comfortable with public transport, they will left their own car at home.

On the other hand, the governments also have to raise the citizen's awareness to combat chao in rush hour. When people do not obey the traffic law, there is no doubt that everything is from bad to worse and traffic jam simultaneously happen. In contrast, although streets are full of vehicles, they could move slowly if the traffic rules are followed.

Note: In my city, there are a lot of road constructions to repair drainage system

thank you

tk

I have lived in Ha Noi for many years. Ha Noi is a big and busy city. There are lots of vehicles on the road all day. There are lots of cars, buses, taxis and trucks on high ways. Vietnamese people like moving by motorbike. Almost every family has a motorbike. The traffic jam is often at about 7 a.m and 5 p.m because it’s the time when people go to work or school and come back home. There are sometimes accidents on the road. Therefore, to reduce these problems, we need to obey traffic rules to reduce accidents as much as possible.

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Nowadays, traffic problems is one of the biggest problems that Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, has to deal with. The first problem is traffic jams. There are too many people using the roads, especially in rush hours when everyone is in a hurry to get to work or come back home. Another problem is poor road conditions. The road is too narrow and bumpy. Moreover, many streets in Hanoi is usually flooded when it has heavy rain making it difficult to move. Traffic accidents is the biggest problem. Everyday, there are more and more accidents happening because of careless drivers: Driving after drinking alcohol, not wearing helmets, and so on. Therefore, solving traffic problems is not only the agent’s duty of Hanoi but also awareness of ourselves.

Traffic jam is not only a problem that Vietnam now has to deal with but also an issue needs overcoming in many other countries. Traffic jam is when there are too many transports moving on a road, and it often occurs in rush hours. We can see that in many cities. Due to a large population and poor infrastructure, with many personal motorbikes, Ha Noi is one of the cities in Vietnam must suffer from the traffic jam. Traffic jam has an influence on us: it leads to annoying and uncomfort. Moreover, the ozone layer is also affected by the carbon dioxide discharged. There are some solutions released to cope with this problem. But the most important way is from us. We ought to use public buses instead of personal transports so that trafic jam can be removed.

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I have lived in Ha Noi for many years. Ha Noi is a big and busy city. There are lots of vehicles on the road all day. There are lots of cars, buses, taxis and trucks on high ways. Vietnamese people like moving by motorbike. Almost every family has a motorbike. The traffic jam is often at about 7 a.m and 5 p.m because it’s the time when people go to work or school and come back home. There are sometimes accidents on the road. Therefore, to reduce these problems, we need to obey traffic rules to reduce accidents as much as possible.

Bài dịch

Tôi đã và đang sống ở Hà Nội nhiều năm. Hà Nội là một thành phố lớn và bận rộn. Có nhiều phương tiện trên đường mỗi ngày. Có nhiều ô tô con, xe buýt và xe tải trên đường cao tốc. Người Việt Nam thích di chuyển bằng xe máy. Hấu hết mỗi gia đình đều có một chiếc xe máy. Ùn tắc giao thông thường vào lúc 7 giờ sáng và 5 giờ chiều bởi vì đây là thời điểm mọi người đi làm hoặc đi học và trở về. Có nhiều vụ tai nạn trên đường. Vì vậy để giảm thiểu các vấn đề này, chúng ta cần tuân thủ các luật giao thông để giảm thiểu tai nạn nhiều nhất có thể.

chúc bạn học tốt nha

dạ, em cảm ơn anh!

1. How long/ it/ take/ get through/ worst/ traffic jam?
A. How long it take for get through worst traffic jam?
B. How long do it take to get through worst traffic jam?
C. How long does it take to get through the worse traffic jam?
D. How long does it take to get through the worst traffic jam?
2. It/ take/ me/ 15 minutes/ walk home/ from/ train station.
A. It take me 15 minutes walk home from the train station.
B. It takes me 15 minutes to walk home from the train station.
C. It take me 15 minutes walks home from train station.
D. It take me 15 minutes to walks home from the train station.
3. Max/ frighten/ by the film/ that he couldn’t sleep/ night.
A. Max were so frightened by the film that he couldn’t sleep in night.
B. Max was so frightening by the film that he couldn’t sleep in night.
C. Max was so frightened by the film that he couldn’t sleep at night.
D. Max frighten the film that he couldn’t sleep at night.
4. The festival/ take/ place/ every year/ the end/ August.
A. The festival takes place every year at the end of August.
B. The festival take place every year at the end of August.
C. The festival taked place every year at the end of August.
D. The festival take place every year at the end August.
5. Christmas / be / one / most famous / religious festivals / the world.
A. Christmas is one of the most famous religious festivals in the world.
B. Christmas is one of the most famous religious festivals on the world.
C. Christmas are one of the most famous religious festivals in the world.
D. Christmas is one of most famous religious festivals in the world.
6. My family and I / go / Thailand / last April / take part / the Songkran Festival.
A. My family and I go to Thailand last April to take part in the Songkran Festival.
B. My family and I went to Thailand last April to take part the Songkran Festival.
C. My family and I went to Thailand last April to take part in the Songkran Festival.
D. My family and I went Thailand last April to take part in the Songkran Festival.
7. It/ important/ us/ learn/ use/ roads properly/ safely.
A. It is important for us to learn to use the roads properly and safely.
B. It is important to us to learn use the roads properly and safely.
C. It is important for us to learn use the roads properly safely.
D. It is important to us to learn to use the roads properly and safely.
8. Mai/ used/ go/ school/ foot/ when/ she/ primary school.
A. Mai used to go to school on foot when she was in primary school.
B. Mai used to go to school by foot when she was in primary school.
C. Mai used to go to school on foot when she is in primary school.
D. Mai used to go school on foot when she was in primary school.
9. Despite/ good/ English,/ he /was/ not/ chosen.
A. Although his English good, he wasn’t chosen.
B. Although his English was good, he wasn’t chosen.
C. Although his English was good, he was chosen.
D. Although his good English, he wasn’t chosen.
10. We/ look carefully/ right/ left/ crossing/ roads.
A. We must look carefully right or left after crossing the roads.
B. We must look carefully right or left before crossing the roads.
C. We must look carefully right and left after crossing the roads.
D. We must look carefully right and left before crossing the roads.

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Nowadays, traffic problems is one of the biggest problems that Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, has to deal with. The first problem is traffic jams. There are too many people using the roads, especially in rush hours when everyone is in a hurry to get to work or come back home. Another problem is poor road conditions. The road is too narrow and bumpy. Moreover, many streets in Hanoi is usually flooded when it has heavy rain making it difficult to move. Traffic accidents is the biggest problem. Everyday, there are more and more accidents happening because of careless drivers: Driving after drinking alcohol, not wearing helmets, and so on. Therefore, solving traffic problems is not only the agent’s duty of Hanoi but also awareness of ourselves.