I love listening to music, so I know a lot of famous bands, but my favorite band is BlackPink. Black Pink is a girl group founded in 2016 with a relatively young age, but Blackpink has achieved many remarkable achievements. When Blackpink debuted in 2016, the two songs "Boombayah" and "Whistle" quickly gained attention thanks to their strong and vibrant melody. Blackpink's influence does not just stop at the music field, especially in Korea, the group also expands into the fashion field. The group's image emphasizes fashion and personality both on and off stage. Although the costumes can show typical uniformity, Blackpink still stands out from other girl groups when each member's outfits show off their own individual style Blackpink attracts international attention. When wearing an innovative version of a traditional Korean outfit "How You Like That. Successful in all aspects from image to music, Blackpink increasingly demonstrates the group's position and influence. not only in the domestic music market, but has spread throughout Asia and also created attraction in the European and Asian markets.

the writing is fluent, emphatic and eloquent. Good job!

I'd like to recommend that the word "achieved"  in line 2 can be replaced with "gained".

New Year day is one of the most widely celebrated festivals in my country. This is the occasion that people celebrates with great joy, hope, festivity and different cultural and other programs.

New Year is the time when a new calendar year begins and the year count is incremented. According to Gregorian calendar, this festival falls on the first January each year.
People start the arrangement to celebrate this festival about one week prior to the 1st January. On the 31st night, people gather together, eat western foods and sometimes the traditional foods, make prayer for the prosperity of for the New Year and stay awake till late night to enjoy the night.

In my country, people groom well in the first January. To some extent people believe that the first January is important to them as it the starting of a new year. They believe that remaining happy, eating good foods and wearing nice clothes would make them happy and prosperous for the whole year.

People greet others, give and receive gifts, visit the amusement parks and do many other activities. Some fares held on for the occasion and a great gathering is observed there. So of the big trade fares, book fares start on the 1st day of the year.

This is an important festival for us. We along with the whole world take this day as an important festival day. In our tradition, we start the year with the hope of eliminating the bitterness and failure of the past year and start a fresh year with the hope of fortune and happiness.

Halloween is a holiday celebrated on October 31st. The most common colors of the day are orange and black. Halloween comes from the ancient Celtic festival Samhain. The ancient Celts believed that on October 31st, now known as Halloween, the boundary between the living and the deceased is not clear, and the dead become dangerous for the living by causing problems such as sickness or damaged crops. On Halloween, the ancient Celts would place a skeleton by their window to represent the dead. Believing that the head was the most powerful part of the body, containing the spirit and knowledge, the Celts used the "head" of the vegetable to decorate their houses. On this day people often wear strange clothes as characters in horrible novels or movies to frighten others. People usually like to dress as ghosts, skeletons, or witches. Now Halloween is an official holiday in almost all European countries.

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My life often revolves around books I really love the color blue Because when I was born my mother told me that maybe you are the pen that drew a new life for me.However, since I was a child, I am very happy to hold a pen. The pictures and I draw are full of color and very entertaining.

my favorite drink is soft drink. It's very great to drink. It has a lot of gases it's season why I love. It is sugar. Every people talks it isn't good for your healthy but I think it isn't harmful for my healthy. I love soft drinks very much