Bài viết của mình còn lỗi sai nào ko sửa cho mình (bằng tiếng anh )

Reading book is a helpful habit for teenager in rapidly changing technological world. To me, it is the book named “Sherlock Holmes” of Auther Conan Doyle that impressed me most. The book tells us the story about a detective who is help everyone to solve the problem. The good point of the story is sometime the case is too hard to Sherlock holmes to solve it and he has to ask his adjutant . Then after few more hour he's finally solve that problem . Beside, his adjutant is very smart too he's always help Holmes to solve the case. The book is a good example about a real detective doing a case.As society is developing, people are pushed into a rushing lifestyle. Therefore, the book carries deep message that you must persevere and effort to complete your problem  . The book has influential text, smooth organization in addition to several surprising detail.The book is deserved to be one of the best seller of the year and it is translated to many other foreign languages. I really love the meaningful books that teach me a lot of valuable lesson in life.My video has ended,thanks for watching, goodbye everyone !!!

Movie is one of my (big) ………………. hobbies. Each film has its own beauty, therefore,
it’s really hard for me to pick one to be the movie that I like the most. However, according to
some films I have watched (recent) ………………., ‘The pursuit of (happy) ………………’ has
great influence on me. The beautiful (relate) ………………… between father and son is the thing
that makes me like it.
The film tells us the story of a father and his little son. After a fail (invest) ……………….,
the father – which was acted by Will Smith – loses everything: his wife, his house, his money.
The only thing that helps the man keep on (live) ………………… is his little son. The whole
movie describes those worst days of his life. No money, no place to live, the two men even have
to sleep in a public rest – room. I really like the way the main character protects his son, the way
he fights against fate and the way he gets back his life. Thanks for the (direct) …………….. –
Gabriele Muccino – the film has a happy (end) …………….. Will Smith is famous for (act)
……………….. films but this time, he shows the audience a new (appear) …………………..
 

Tớ chuẩn bị làm bài nói Tiếng Anh. Đề Bài : What is the most important characteristic in a person? Các bạn đọc và tìm giúp mình có chỗ nào sai hay không phù hợp thì chỉ mình nha! Mình cám ơn các bạn rất nhiều.

We live in a world of peace without war. The Vietnamese people have gone through painful historical pages and have spent thousands of years developing. And if Vietnam wants to develop like other countries, there must be people who are genius. I have read a newspaper about people in Japan. Japan is one of the most developed countries. Because people there are economic and life characteristics. Japanese people are always afraid of backward against the world so they always exchange knowledge even when they are on the road they also hold books to learn. They are also very good: do not squeeze in line, do not steal. Therefore, if Vietnam wants to develop, then there must be people who have characteristics like Japanese people. And in my opinion people need these traits:
1. Patriotism:
- Patriotism is one of the most important characteristics in people. Because patriotism is a driving force behind our development goals.
2. Have virtue:
- virtue is important in people because it is applied to life and economy. Being an honest person, knowing how to help others, giving in to the economy is not easy.
3. Benefit:
- Do people need to be grateful, kind. If you are honest, people around you will respect you.
4. Honestly:
- The lie is something that is being condemned in today's society. Lies in work and in life will cause others to lose faith in you. So honesty is always good quality. Because honesty will help you succeed and develop the virtues of the Vietnamese people.
5. Humble:
At work, when a project succeeds we will be excited. Success not only brings joy to us but also motivates us to work harder. But not because of that success, I am subjective, always bragging. Therefore, human beings need to have humility, always for their success must be lower than others. Typically, President Ho Chi Minh always has a humble heart that everyone admire.
6. Powerful:
- In addition to success, there is a failure in life. An Australian president said: "Failure is the opportunity to start the success again." Yes, failure helps us to grow. Not because of a failure that you give up. You must always have a strong, energetic spirit.
7. Unity:
- Finally is unity. Unity has been a tradition since the war. Thanks to that unity, the Vietnamese have expelled the enemy, unified the country. Today, that unity is also applied in economics. If the Vietnamese people are united together, they can create a new phenomenon that will bring Vietnam to the top of the world. And no one else is the Vietnamese U23 football team, which has made 90 million Vietnamese people proud of their unity and love of the country.

Câu 1: In _____ 1990s, there were many famous music lines with famous singers. One of them is Michael Jackson, who is known as _____ POP legend.

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Câu 2: _____ number of employees in our company is up to _____ thousand, so we plan to move half of the number to our new branch.

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Câu 3: Our family decided to hold _____ party at Tolus restaurant because it was considered as _____ place with landscape and quality service.

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Câu 4: If you look through the telescope, you can see millions of stars glittering brightly in _____ space.

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Câu 5: Do not disturb me while I am working in the room. Please contact me after _____ hour.

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