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Write a paragraph about drawbacks when living in a city (60-80 words) Help me pls! - Hoc24

Everybody usually ponder on living in city or countryside, but I'm certain that living in city is better. These are some important reasons which you want to live in city. The first point, there're many things in city, you can search simple things or luxurious things. There're many kinds of telecom service, for example: internet stations, cell phone offices, telephone offices, post offices, and so forth; there're many kinds of transport service, ex: taxi, airplane, train, motorbike taxi, and so on; there're many different services, for example: beauty salons, good hospitals, good universities, foreign language schools, coffee bars, supermarkets, book stores, and they're always near your house. Now, all the factories aretransferring from city out to suburb, so the pollution will reduce. The next point, there're much foods, all the good foods in the world have been occurred in city. Especially in VN, you can eat everything, anywhere, from roadsides to the luxurious restaurants. Finally, if you aren't lazy, you can earn money easily in city where there are many jobs and many contacts waiting for you. You see, the millions people of countryside are migrating to city. Among of them, they have become the billionaires. In short, there is anything in city which is best convenience. Why don't you test to live in city? You'll agree with me completely.

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   My hometown is Ho Chi Minh City, which is also known as Saigon. This is the biggest city of Vietnam, and it has a lot of interesting things. First, we have to mention the cuisine here. Since this is the biggest financial center of Vietnam, it attracts many people from different parts of the country. Therefore, they bring along with them the featuring foods from their regions, and this make Ho Chi Minh become the biggest food center as well. Second, people and the lifestyle here are also special. It perfectly represents the open style of the South, and it is always busy. The streets are always full of people, and traffic jams is one of the most serious problem here. We can never actually drive on the main roads without being stuck for a few times, and this situation lasts all day long even if it is in the working hours. Third, the citizens work very hard since it is not easy to live in the big city, but they also spend a lot of time and money on entertaining. They love to go to shopping malls, movie theaters and coffee shops. The lights seem never go off here, and people start to go out at the time when most parts of the countries go to sleep. Despite sleeping late, they can go to work very early in the next morning. Going out is considered as a culture of Ho Chi Minh City, and the lifestyle here is very open and active. I love this city a lot, and I think it is worthy for people to live. In my opinion, there is nowhere that can be fun and comfortable like Saigon, so I will live here forever.

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Outline: 

1. Mở bài:

- Background information: nói chung về topic chính trong bài, như ở đây là lợi ích của việc sống ở 1 thành phố.

- Intro: diễn giải về câu background information ở đề bài.

- Thesis statement: Quan điểm của người viết - Agree/Disagree hoặc ủng hộ quan điểm nào hơn.

- Sequence: trình tự các ý sẽ nói tới trong bài.

2. Thân bài:

- Thesis: đưa ra các luận điểm 1 để support cho quan điểm của người viết.

- Discussion: lấy luận cứ phù hợp, phân tích, diễn giải cho luận điểm.

- Example: lấy ví dụ cụ thể để minh hoạ cho luận điểm.

+, Drawbacks: bạn cũng có thể đưa ra các mặt trái của luận điểm vừa nêu trong trường hợp bạn muốn bổ sung cho đoạn văn. Vị vậy, điều này bạn có thể hoặc không cần thực hiện.

4. Kết bài:

- Summary: tóm tắt những luận điểm đã phân tích.

- Re-statement of thesis: nhắc lại quan điểm của người viết.

- Reccomendation: khá giống với phần background information, đưa ra câu kết cho topic.

Essay:

       I would rather living in a city because actually, life in a city is always more exciting and comfortable than life in a countryside or in a small town.

       In cities, it's easier to find good and ineresting job. Moreover, it has all kinds of facilities as cinemas, galeries, theaters or restaurants, where people can spend their free time relaxing. Most of people take lots of their time to use health care service, to be honest, it’s the best convinient of living in cities.

       Besides that, the people in cities have better living standart than people in countryside, because they have a higher salary. Also having many community services for customers who need them.

       Next, there are a lot of kind of jobs from teachers, marketing, designers,... which need a great human resource. Therefore, people feel easy to find a suitable job. In addition, the quality of life in cities is much better than in rural areas. The infrastructure is modern and there are full of services for the people. More and more entertainment centers, commercial centers, hospitals and schools are built. It means that people's health is better and their needs for entertainment are better.

       However, living in a big city have some disadvantages. Traffic jam is big problem, especially in rush hours. The more vehicles the cities have, the more the environment polluted. In addition, the percentage of criminal in cities is always higher than in the countryside.

        In conclusion, nowaday there are many large cities grow up, more and more people migrate in the city, but besides the positive aspects, the city still has limitations that no one wishes. Therefore, veryone should take consideration before deciding where to live.

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