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-hello, my name is PTTN. I have a big passion for soccer. It is a great sport that helps you to have good health and good health. I play it with my buddy team. It's fun! Unfortunately, we only played for 2 years because there were some transfer students when we were in 6th grade. We used to have 11 people and now we have only 8. But I still do not give up on that passion, please help me play , see you again

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- soccer

-team (11 people)

-two years

-11 people

-no

My favorite sport is football. It's a team sport. It usually take 90 minutes for an offical football match but we play only for 20 minutes. There are 11 players on each team. It's very easy to play because we only need one ball to play, also you must to have some skills to play. I usually play football with my friends in the afternoon. I love football very much because it's fun and good for health.

Volleyball is my favourite sport. It is a team game. It has two teams and 12 players in the yard. A match lasts for three or five half. A match has three times to consult. It does not need a lot of support equipment such as swimming, skateboarding or baseball. I love it very much. And you?

I sport and I play it two hours everyday. My favorite sport is playing badminton. There are four reasons why I it. Firstly, I can improve my health through playing it. I play it about 2 times every week. It makes me feel energe everyday. Secondly, I enjoy the feeling that badminton flies in the air. I can change the movement direction of badminton without much effort and make opponent lose it. Thirdly, I can make many friends when I play badminton. I often play it with many kinds of persons. We can improve our skills with exercises. Also we talk about many interesting things when we have an break. Finally, playing badminton is not as intense as other sports such as basketball and soccer. It lessens the possibility of being hurt. So If you playing badminton, please feel free to contact me. I think we can exchange experiences and make friends. 

P/S : Hoq chắc :>

bài của TL sai ở 1 số chỗ như:

+)I sport mk nghĩ thiếu

+)My favorite sport là môn thể thao yêu thích nên mk nghĩ chỉ dùng badminton

+)mk nghĩ ko có cấu trúc through+Ving 

+)energe =>full of energy 

+)mk nghĩ kinds of person nên đc thay = people

+)an break=>a break

+)you playing  nên chuyển thành play theo cấu trúc câu đk loại 0

Dù sao mk cũng thấy bạn viết rất tốt.Làm bạn nha

Hi everyone, My nam is Ha. My favourite sports is badminton. It's an individual sports and a team sports. It's last about one hours or two hours. There are about two or for players. It's need some equipment : rackret , net, shutlecock. That is my favorite sport.

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There are many sports but I like badminton the most. It can be a team or individual sport. A badminton match can have 2 people playing against or maybe 2 people on each side. In a badminton match, people will be divided into 3 innings and each quarter is assigned a score of 21. To find a winner for each round, points are calculated as follows: - When both have reached 20 points (20-20), whichever side scores 2 points in a row, that side wins. Để chơi cầu lông tốt nhất, tôi phải có tốc độ, chiều cao và kỹ thuật điêu luyện.  Sometimes, I play it with my best friends or my parents. Besides playing badminton provide for my body with the required energy to help me go through each day. Moreover, playing badminton is simple for everybody. To me, badminton is the most fantasic sport in the world.

My favourite sport is football. Football is the most popular sport in the world. It is a team sport. The football match usually has eleven footballer. And it usually lasts for 90 minutes for an offical football match. Football is easy because we only need a ball to play. I usually play football in the school yard and i play with my friends. I like playing football because it is very good for helth and i can keep the shape. And And my dream is to become a professional player.Thank you for reading.

Bài làm:

My favorite sport is basketball. It is played by two teams, each consisting of five players. I play basketball about three times a week, either at the local gym or with friends at a nearby court. The equipment needed includes a basketball, a hoop, and appropriate sportswear like sneakers and jerseys. I enjoy basketball because it combines teamwork, strategy, and physical skill. The fast-paced nature of the game keeps me engaged, and I love the thrill of making a good play or scoring a basket.

Dịch:

_{Môn thể thao yêu thích của tôi là bóng rổ. Nó được chơi bởi hai đội, mỗi đội gồm năm cầu thủ. Tôi chơi bóng rổ khoảng ba lần một tuần, tại phòng gym địa phương hoặc với bạn bè ở sân gần đó. Các thiết bị cần thiết bao gồm một quả bóng rổ, một cái rổ và trang phục thể thao phù hợp như giày thể thao và áo đấu. Tôi thích bóng rổ vì nó kết hợp giữa làm việc nhóm, chiến lược và kỹ năng thể chất. Tính chất nhanh nhẹn của trò chơi giữ cho tôi luôn hứng thú, và tôi thích cảm giác khi thực hiện một pha bóng tốt hoặc ghi điểm.}

My favorite sport is football. It's a team sport. It usually lasts for 90 minutes for an offical football match but we play only for 30 minutes. There are 11 players on each team. It's very easy to play because we need only one ball to play. I usually play football with my friends in the afternoon. I love football very much because it's fun and good for health.

ex1; viết về một môn thể thao / trò chơi mà bạn thích. S US DỤNG Ý TƯỞNG CỦA BẠN VÀ CÁC TIÊU CHUẨN CUỐI.      - TÊN CỦA THỂ THAO / GAME      - LÀ NH ITNG CÔNG TY HO ORC MỘT THỂ THAO CÁ NHÂN?        - NÓ KÉO DÀI BAO LÂU ?       - Có nhiều người chơi ở đó?       - CNTT KHÔNG cần thiết bị nào?

I playing badminton.It is team sport.It last from 15 minutes to 25 minutes in a match.There are 2 or 4 players.To play badminton,I need a racket and sport shoes.

My favourite is badminton. It's an individual and a team sport game. It lasts one hour. There are 4 players in a team. To play it, I need a racket and a shuttlecock. When play badminton, I feel good and comfortable. I'm sure that you will have a healthy body if you often play it. I love badminton so much, because it's like my friend.

My favourite game is badminton. It's a team and individual game. A badminton match last 45 minutes. May, there are two teams and each teams has one or on one player. Alls you need iss just a racket, wed and playground. Badminton is a game good for your health. If you often play badminton, you will have good health. Everyone can play this game. I often play badminton every sunday. I love badminton very much.

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